Scene 4 reworks

 Scene 4 Animatic changes 

For scene 4 there was a want to focus less on the food seeming like Pavo's source of anxiety and reframe it as people being the main issue. I made a lot of changes but they weren't really working out. I felt as though too much content got cut and it felt emptier which I wasn't a huge fan of, but I think it had to be changed just to see if it could work out or not. In the end we went with the first edit which had cut out some of the more unnecessary scenes while still leaving enough of a build up to Pavo's big breakdown. 

Edit 1

-Made storyboard reflect the changes that were made in the animatic

-Redrew first shot with Pavo and Bettys hand
-Added 2 panels of Pavo looking at the fish
-Edited Pavo's hand for continuinity as he lowers it when fish fingers arrive
-Cut the camera movement in shot 5 with betty looking at Pavo and his food 
-Changed Betty pointing to fish  instead of fork 
-Flipped Betty in same shots last panel 
-Changed Pavo closeup looking at Bettys offered fish 
-Edited all fish drawings so eyes are closed 
-Added Betty shrug panel
-Added 4 panel sequence of Pavo eating fish finger and coughing 
-Rearranged and edited together the 2 restaurant looking at Pavo shots 
-re-edited the Pavo big cough shot (4 panels)

-Redrew Pavo eye shot
-Added additional Pavo looking shocked panel before screaming fish appeared 

Edit 2

-Removed 2 panels of Pavo looking at Bettys fish

-Added 2 panels of Pavo's eyes tracking the fish as Betty brings it closer 
-Added close up of fish before it "comes to life" 
-Rearranged Pavo denying the fish and the fish coming to life scene 
-Added 3 panels of betty shrugging and eating the fish once Pavo doesn't want it 
-Added 3 panels of Pavo picking up the fish finger 
-Redrew 2 panels of Pavo grabbing finger and looking out to restaurant 
-Added scene of restaurant looking happy 
-Rearranged Pavo eating scene 
-Added in restaurant annoyed at pave scene 
-Rearranged lightning shot
-Added fish wheezing shot 
-Added Pavo inhaling before coughing panel 
-Redrew Pavo coughing panel

Edit 3

-Rearranged Pavo eating fish fingers sequence with Betty handing over fish sequence

-Removed the first coughing sequence

Final Edit 
reverted mostly to the changes made in Edit 1