New scene 3 final rework

 

As a storyboard group we went over all of the main issues we wanted to tweak in the final edit, I was in charge of implementing the changes to scene 4, which has now been renumbered to scene 3 as scene 2 and 3 were merged due to shorter length and having less people to work on the animatic. 
the changes for scene three we talked about were:

Bring tension up , small cough comeback
Bring the crowd shots back
More of a struggle when he leaves 

The small cough didn't fit well so we took it out again

Removed betty offering the fish 
Made the fish looking at Pavo cause the cough 
Added more panels where Pavo is struggling against the water as he leaves the booth 

I think these changes have helped the pacing of my scene and make it flow a bit better, I think having two coughs felt a bit repetitive and took away the shock value of the big cough, so I'm pretty happy with hw it turned out.