In-between shot reworks and cleanup

I've made most of the tweaks that I've needed to on the shots that can be worked on without the 3D animatic.
3_17 || before ||exaggerate judgy look 


This was the end result, I think the emotion is much clearer to read now, and I'm still pretty happy with the motion.


3_16v2 || before || add jitter to eyes looking at Pavo


The eye jitter looked quite good, however with Pavo's over exaggerated eye movements it now looks a bit too much, so I'm going to revert Pavo's eyes to the first version I did

I think that it looks a lot clearer now, however this version of Pavo didn't have the sweat in-betweens as the old version, so I had to bring those back into the shot.

shot with the sweat in-betweens added.



3_6 || before || Added fishstick details

I also cleaned up the shot and erased all the areas where objects were intersecting to make it a bit easier for the cleanup artists


2_16 || make faster, add sweat, start turnaround menu, add pages flipping

I also cleaned up the intersecting objects as well in this shot. as I had animated the book and Pavo separately it took me a while to clean and combine but I think its important to see what it will look like with just the cleaned lineart to make sure everything looks smooth and tidy. I didn't end up adding he sweat because I didn't want to many different animated parts fighting for the viewers attention, and I think the page turning helps to add to the sense of anxiety. 



Bella's shot sequence referenced

All of these shots are now ready to be passed on to the cleanup crew, there are a few shots of mine that  I will need to cleanup but my main focus for now is doing the keyframes and in-betweens first.

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