I've made most of the tweaks that I've needed to on the shots that can be worked on without the 3D animatic.
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| 3_17 || before ||exaggerate judgy look |
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| This was the end result, I think the emotion is much clearer to read now, and I'm still pretty happy with the motion. |
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| 3_16v2 || before || add jitter to eyes looking at Pavo |
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The eye jitter looked quite good, however with Pavo's over exaggerated eye movements it now looks a bit too much, so I'm going to revert Pavo's eyes to the first version I did
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| I think that it looks a lot clearer now, however this version of Pavo didn't have the sweat in-betweens as the old version, so I had to bring those back into the shot. |
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| shot with the sweat in-betweens added. |
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3_6 || before || Added fishstick details
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| I also cleaned up the shot and erased all the areas where objects were intersecting to make it a bit easier for the cleanup artists |
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| 2_16 || make faster, add sweat, start turnaround menu, add pages flipping |
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| I also cleaned up the intersecting objects as well in this shot. as I had animated the book and Pavo separately it took me a while to clean and combine but I think its important to see what it will look like with just the cleaned lineart to make sure everything looks smooth and tidy. I didn't end up adding he sweat because I didn't want to many different animated parts fighting for the viewers attention, and I think the page turning helps to add to the sense of anxiety. |
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| Bella's shot sequence referenced |
All of these shots are now ready to be passed on to the cleanup crew, there are a few shots of mine that I will need to cleanup but my main focus for now is doing the keyframes and in-betweens first.
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