Scene 4 Storyboard Tweaks
After I had finished redrawing the thumbnails we had done in Toon Boom Storyboard I then timed it out to the rough animatic that Max had uploaded to YouTube, as well as insert any camera movements so I could remove all of the red placeholder arrows I had been using prior. after this I started retiming some of the shots and adding in more panels where I thought more clarity would be important and would help later on when it came to timing and animation. 
 
After this there were a few changes that needed to be made to my section of the storyboard. The things that ended up tweaked were:
Shot 9: Made Betty lean in closer over the table
Shot 21: Made longer so characters can take more time
Shot 21: Made longer so characters can take more time
Shot 21-22: Added slower Zoom
Shot 26: Added blinking panels
Shot 28-29: Made longer
Shot 29: Added Betty eye movements and blink
Shot 30: Added panel before Pavo drinks for him to Reassure Betty that everything is fine
Shot 37: Made the shot longer
Shot 44: Made the shot longer
Shot 26: Added blinking panels
Shot 28-29: Made longer
Shot 29: Added Betty eye movements and blink
Shot 30: Added panel before Pavo drinks for him to Reassure Betty that everything is fine
Shot 37: Made the shot longer
Shot 44: Made the shot longer
General
-Added in missing facial hair on Pavo
-Added in missing facial hair on Pavo
Some final changes I made involved the blinking scene after Pavo coughs, as I changed it to just a single blink before Pavo feels everyone looking at him. I also worked on a few continuinity errors, making sure people are still holding things in the right hand, the fish being on the plate and on the right side of the plate/facing the right way etc. I also wanted to make sure all of the characters were looking consistent between shots so I went back and made sure to include things like facial hair and eyebags for Pavo and eyelashes for Betty. 
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