Comic Feedback and Adjhustments.

The main feedback I got for my comic pages was to make the last panel on page 8 stand out a little more. I felt that the pose looked very flat so I tried to work more with some motion lines and some perspective.

I also decided to play with the helmet being kicked off and make it feel like it was exiting the panel itself. I also tried to incorperate an arc into the motion lines to give the kick a sense of direction. With this pose I felt more happy with the panel compared to the original lineart. 

 from here I moved onto the line art. I also added a shattered visor also flying of the helmet, and decided to go with a solid black background to help contrast the action, so all of the focus will be on the character and action. to help the outer line art not get lost on the background I also went over everything with a white outline / edge.

I also wasn't happy with panel 3's eye shadow, and as panel 7 also features shadows obscuring her eyes I didn't want to overdo it. 

I also made a few other changes on the page, with the third panel I felt the line weight wasn't heavy enough compared to the rest of the page, so I went over the outer lines with a 7px brush

I feel like the page looks more uniform now, and changing the last panels pose definitely helps the whole page feel less flat. Because I'm mostly happy with my line art I want to start experimenting with how I will colour my comic, and if I want to try and experiment with different colouring styles and techniques.