Comic Page breakdown
While I have my general polot outline for the 12 page comic down, I want to break it up into individual pages to make sure the pacing isnt too fast or too slow and I have enough content to fill out the 12 pages.
My original concept for the story is here:
-A government agency is developing an AI war machine to infiltrate the neighboring country and committing espionage. The decision is made to disguise these AI as children to help avoid suspicion as much as possible. Before these weapons of destruction can be released and smuggled into society the AI must learn functions and how to act as a child to blend into its surroundings and to bug test any issues in the code. Android 005 is currently held within a facility disguised as a factory within the neighboring country. Before the war protocol and commands can be installed into the android the facility is discovered and breached by the government. The decision is made to monitor the android child and study the technology, which is passed onto a scientist working for the government. As well as studying the android's behavior, he must become a caregiver to her too, as the government wants to ensure the android continues to function normally. She is aware that she is a robot, but because she hadn't been given any commands or had any dangerous code added to her, she functions mostly like a normal child. The other government is aware of the asset they have lost and desperately want to recover android 005. An Agent is tasked to protect android 005 and the scientist full time. The android girl mistakes her for her new mother and the two are commanded to commit to pretending on order to study the development of the AI.
I typed this out during class, now I want to break it down into the different parts of the story
I want the setup/exposition/ character establishment first, then the introduction of the conflict, and then the resolution at the end. I want the comic to mostly focus on the rescue operation, but I want to give the context as to why its happening and who the characters in the story are.
Page 1
establish conflict between two countries
Page 2
set up android program
Page 3
introduction to Android 05
Page 4
introduction to scientist/agent Alaska
Page 5
Facility breach
Page 6
agents look for the android
Page 7
standoff
Page 8
android 05 discovered
Page 9
mission end
Page 10
debrief
Page 11
scientist and alaska tasked with taking care of android 05
Page 12
new life
My original concept for the story is here:
-A government agency is developing an AI war machine to infiltrate the neighboring country and committing espionage. The decision is made to disguise these AI as children to help avoid suspicion as much as possible. Before these weapons of destruction can be released and smuggled into society the AI must learn functions and how to act as a child to blend into its surroundings and to bug test any issues in the code. Android 005 is currently held within a facility disguised as a factory within the neighboring country. Before the war protocol and commands can be installed into the android the facility is discovered and breached by the government. The decision is made to monitor the android child and study the technology, which is passed onto a scientist working for the government. As well as studying the android's behavior, he must become a caregiver to her too, as the government wants to ensure the android continues to function normally. She is aware that she is a robot, but because she hadn't been given any commands or had any dangerous code added to her, she functions mostly like a normal child. The other government is aware of the asset they have lost and desperately want to recover android 005. An Agent is tasked to protect android 005 and the scientist full time. The android girl mistakes her for her new mother and the two are commanded to commit to pretending on order to study the development of the AI.
I typed this out during class, now I want to break it down into the different parts of the story
I want the setup/exposition/ character establishment first, then the introduction of the conflict, and then the resolution at the end. I want the comic to mostly focus on the rescue operation, but I want to give the context as to why its happening and who the characters in the story are.
Page 1
establish conflict between two countries
Page 2
set up android program
Page 3
introduction to Android 05
Page 4
introduction to scientist/agent Alaska
Page 5
Facility breach
Page 6
agents look for the android
Page 7
standoff
Page 8
android 05 discovered
Page 9
mission end
Page 10
debrief
Page 11
scientist and alaska tasked with taking care of android 05
Page 12
new life
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