A critique of Animation Essay Feedback

Overall, I'm pretty happy with the mark I received with my essay. some of the things I need to work on are making sure that I am including multiple sources to build an argument/make a point. I only used the main document to build my essay, so I could have had a stronger paper if I had brought in different perspectives from other informed people. I had a few grammatical and punctuation errors too, so next time I should probably be a bit more cautious when proof reading before I submit. Another thing I could be more cautious about in the future is to give more context and information on authors/filmmakers to clarify what era they are from or what their work included.